I need a good thesis statement?

My essay is about life on the mississippi river in the 1800s working on a steamboat. Heres the first part of my paragraph:"Lots of kids who lived along the Mississippi River in the 1800’s dreamed of becoming a steamboat pilot. Being a steamboat pilot was an ideal job for anyone. Flowing along the river for miles and miles at a time was anyone’s perfect vacation."

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  1. wlodyka says:

    The 1800′s in Mississippi was a simple time, when the dream occupation was to pilot a steamboat. ORPiloting a steamboat in 1800′s Mississippi was the dream occupation for many kids.