Please tell me what you think of this short essay, which describes my LIFE GOAL.?

my life goalI have been accused of having no goals. I have been accused of not knowing what I want out of life. I do have a goal, though it's not the type that you'd go around talking about to everyone. Here, anonymously, I post my life goal.I want to buy enough plastic ball-pit balls to fill up a room. I can get these balls from ebay and fill up my bedroom for under a thousand dollars. I want to take all of the furniture out of the room, and have nothing but the balls in the room. I will of course black out the windows.When the room is full of balls, I will bring in twenty kittens, and place them on top of the balls. They will walk around and sink, and be unsteady on their furry paws. I myself will wade through the balls, as if I were swimming, occasionally passing a kitten, sometimes at the top, sometimes at the bottom, sometimes in the middle. Always sunken into the plastic ballpit, always with kittens all around me.



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4 Responses to “Please tell me what you think of this short essay, which describes my LIFE GOAL.?”

  1. barkpeeler says:

    I love it!Good luck, I seriously hope it happens. But please, please buy little kitten helmets.

  2. placodont says:

    that was freaky u cat killer

  3. polygynaiky says:

    I think that your essay is a great piece of satire, in that it illustrates the importance of having a goal to work towards but also the triviality that the “goal” being worked towards can contain.Many people assume that having a goal is good enough. You’ve illustrated that this is not the case. It may not be having a goal itself that is important, but rather the content and intent of the given goal. And if you’re serious, I wish you the best of luck. Keep in mind the wellbeing of the kitties! lol ; )

  4. intubator says:

    I think you need to vary sentence structure, and also explain why this goal of yours would make you happy.