Can someone help me rewrite this sentence?

It's an arguementive essay on why smoking should be banned in public places.Some believe smoking shouldn’t be banned in public places because it’s a free country and they have the freedom to make there own choices. Many feel that people have the freedom to put their life in danger but as long as it doesn’t affect some else’s life.



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3 Responses to “Can someone help me rewrite this sentence?”

  1. churruck says:

    Some people feel that smoking should not be banned in public places because this is a free country, and they should have the freedom to make their own choices. In contrast, many feel that smokers are not only endangering their own lives, but also the lives of non-smokers.

  2. freeloving says:

    An individuals freedom of choice must not infringed on public well being and safety.

  3. antievolutionist says:

    There should be their (own choices). I would also just remove ‘but’ from the last sentence. You are repeating much the same point in your two sentences. You could perhaps merge the two, but it might well be that you did that for emphasis, in which case it is fine.